The Commute
By Rey Spadoni
It occurred to me
In a pipe that brings me from here to there on every day, five in a row, week to week to week
And on the rails we stop and start the same number and places in the here to there with a clack a clack that cuddles and rocks me to sleep
It matters not whether I face ahead or back or if I see outside a pipe or even if at all for we will advance then retreat according to those rails again and again and it matters not
It occurred to me
That every part of me could do that in every way on every day and I would advance and retreat the same which like a pendulum marks little more than time
And it seemed that if I missed the swing of the arm one time and stepped from the rails that I might advance more then retreat, or maybe the opposite, but whether I face ahead or back and whether I see outside or even if at all would matter now
Because I would live and mark something else and more, so that I might see and hear above the clack a clack for what else there may be, retreat as it could and advance as it might
It occurred to me
In a pipe from here to there
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Rey, thank you for sending me in this direction! You need to look up a few poems of William Bronk; your poem reminds me of some of his work. I love the photo! If only the guy was wearing a hat, it could be 1925 as you rode the pendulum backwards!
Excellent “motion” photo Rey. How slow was your shutter speed?
Thanks, Rodney. .6 sec at f22.
Rey
Thanks Rey. Good to know